Stay hungry
Stay foolish

No one would understand that of what i want
that inside me
is more than
beyond

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Some useful comments i got

Paul Oliver Ong
This piece has some strong moments in it. I think you can still push the timing even more in some areas to really sell the drama or thoughts of the old lady. The poses are looking great, just a matter of experimenting with the emphasis/timing:) neat job!

Joel Cisneros
floaty!

Alberto Martinez Arce
Nice one, but your lipsinc needs a lot of work

Jamie L. Beaty
Needs work with body physics.

sebastian ciubuca
nice

David Badgerow
Nice use of the MooM rig, I like how you kept the mouth turned in for the old woman. Also, like how you capitalized on the breathe-in opportunity in there. Overall I think could just be fine tuned, timing adjusted to give more emphasis to the holds, and jump between poses quicker, a bit too swimmy now. Good work though.



thanks guys.
Damn i need to open up my mind!